Sleep well,my child
Oh!my purest,dearest soul!
The World is full of terrors
but Mamma will protect you from it in whole!
Dream, my child
Of the Flowers,the Moon and the beautiful sea
Don’t you open your eyes,
There is nothing good in this World for you to see
Move, my child
kick with all glee
There are no restrictions, no fear
Unlike in this World of misery
Love, my child
with all your little heart
Remember,your father died for it
Ensuring us safety when times grew dark
Enjoy, my child
the last month is here
Soon you’ll be out
In this World that enjoys nothing but the sight of a falling tear
Shush, my child
oh,what do I see,
they have reached here too,
the demons with their terrible machinery.
Pray, my child
the stories of their rapes and inhumanity be untrue.
When Mamma begs for mercy,
atleast they spare you.
Glue your ears, my child
I don’t want you to hear my last cry
Two shots through my chest
sated,they have left me to die.
Push, my child
The lights have begun to fade
I’ll shout the remaining of my lungs Β with pleas
but doubt the dead will come to our aid.
Remember, my child
Your parents tried
Alas you’ll die in me
before you’ve even cried.
Sleep well, my child…
– Aks
*The poet has tried to comprehend the incomprehensible suffering of a pregnant woman in the unfortunate country (during the current horrid times) of Syria
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So sad π¦ ..
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Yes,I can hardly bear to imagine real people actually going through all this! π¦
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Yea, it’s absolutely terrible π¦
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I’m not so keen on this title so If any reader could suggest a better title, I’ll be thankful!
Thanks for reading this post!Have a nice day!
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Very pathetic indeed
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This is so touching!!!
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Thank you so much!!
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I thought death was cruel…u changed my opinion…birthless deaths are…more…much more cruelπ
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soul stirring….
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Thanks! I’m glad the poem achieved its purpose π
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Gosh, this got me in tears.
Your words managed to bring the entire scene in front of my eyes.
Allow me to relate this with my land, Kashmir.
Good work, Aks. π
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Shereen,your comment brought tears to my eyes π¦
Well,this may just be the first time that it pained me so much to hear that someone could relate to my poetry.
May the Almighty give the strength to you and to all the people of the most beautiful land of Kashmir to bear with all the ongoing sufferings and May He soon put an to end to it returning peace and harmony. Ameen.
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Ameen.
Well after a long time I, too, came across such a strong piece. I will be sharing your poem on my Facebook account as well, linking your WordPress blog. This deserves to be spread and known.
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Thank you so much for this kind of appreciation!! It means a lot to me!!
Also, I don’t intend to own any rights to my poetry so you could very well share it without linking my WordPress account! I wouldn’t mind it all!
Thanks a ton again for such kind of encouragement!! π
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Oh no no don’t say that. It’s your hardwork; you deserve full credit for it. I make sure that when I share something, it will be with due credit to the writer. =)
And it is entirely my pleasure. If I see something worthwhile, it’d be unfair if I don’t spread the word.
Once again, good job there! π
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Thank you,Shereen π
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Hey there. I just shared your work on my Instagram account. If you use Instagram, please write me your username so I can tag you. Let them see who is the writer of this fantastic piece! π
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Hey Shereen! Nope,I’m sorry,I am not on Instagram yet. But I did look it up at yours and the photo and the modifications you have done to it are absolutely amazing! Wonderfully presented.
And,Thank you so much once again! Nothing gives a writer more pleasure than seeing his work being appreciated.I read the most recent ones of yours too out there on insta,loved the freedom one!! I’ll definitely enjoy it better on reading it at a much slower pace next week once I am free.
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Touched a chord π₯
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Aww! Thank you for commenting! π
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Yes, very touching. Thanks for posting.
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Thank you Tresa, I’m glad you liked it!
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Loveliness in the midst of sadness. Thank you!
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Lovely way of putting it!! Thank you for this beautiful comment!
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This is so unbelievably beautiful, I love your way with words.
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Thank you so much friend! Means a lot!! Oh and I absolutely love the name with which you have commented! it’s beautiful,inspiration for my future post perhaps,I hope you don’t mind that π
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Thank you so much! Of course you can use it as inspiration!
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Thank you! π
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So beautifully sad. Very moving.
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Thank you! It’s encouraging to read that the pain I felt , while thinking about and writing this poem, is also felt deeply by the readers.
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Very moving.
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Thanks for the read and the comment, friend! Truly appreciate it π
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It is beautiful and very touching. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much!! Really appreciate it π
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Very touching and soul stirring indeed. Shared it on twitter.
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Thank you so much! This truly means a lot!!
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You are welcome dear. I love to share good and meaningful poems.
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This indeed was beautifully described… The fear of death.. it’s scary..
but I would like to say one thing, the time when the baby is to be born in itself is a crucial time. A matter of life and death a moment of any change..
Very good.. may the soul rest in peace who are no more coz of that situation..
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Yes,I can barely imagine how painfully scary that would be to the mother.
Thank you so very much for sharing your views here and also for the appreciation! It’s comments like these that drive me to write more on important issues to create awareness.
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Would love to read your thoughts
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Thank you so much! It means a lot!
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Your poems are really magic. When I read one, I am tempted to read one more, and just like that I ended up reading this one after ‘Passionate Eyes’. π
Syria – A term now not known as a nation, but a DEAD nation, a nation burning in the flames of anguish, terror and screams, a massacred nation seeking helps from all around the world. The trauma the people must be going through is unimaginable. π¦
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Haha.. Thank you so much, Aditi!
This left me smiling from ear to ear and that’s probably the magic that lies in your beautiful comments across the various posts on this blog.So a big Thank You for that!!
I remember reading a thoughtful and touching post on your blog on the same issue and it pains me everytime I even try to imagine the sufferings out there. π¦
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See the irony. We have to put even the pain in a beautiful way.
But anyhow, it was my pleasure. π
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Yeah, never looked at the posts this way but yeah,you’re right,even pain is being decorated by us these days..
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This poem is is so sad but so good! I was almost tearing up by the end of it. The poem develops a sort of pattern or rhythmic flow that mimics a soothing lullaby, yet it is juxtaposed with these jarring concepts of war. This makes it kind of taunting or mocking which further demonstrates how cruel the people enforcing the war are. Kudos to you for being able to compose such captivating, moving poem on such a deep level :).
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Oh!Thank you so much!!
I couldn’t have put(what I had attempted to do with this poem) in any better way and reading your comment stating exactly that makes me think ‘a job well done’. Thank you for the read and the words of appreciation. It truly means a lot π
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