Don’t leave Eli, stay
we’ve been together so long,
embraced every hurdle
singing a common song.
Don’t leave Eli, stay.
Agreed, I laid the rules
enforced them on you,
but honey, you were the most precious amongst my panoply of jewels.
Don’t leave Eli,stay
Shared my entire purse
yet you continued to pound
but never did I allow matters to get worse.
Don’t leave Eli, stay
People came in and I know it caused you pain.
Father, May be our last hope
else it’s Brexit all over again.
– Aks
Dear reader, do you enjoy reading this new series based on inspirations derived from the real World events? Any suggestions for the next one?
In the meant time,you might enjoy this poem, Sleep well, my child .It also has been inspired by a real World event.
Thanks for reading! Have a swell day!
The Poetic Syndrome 
It was simple and sweet.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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You have an awesome take on real life events! And their interpretation through poems is yet another brilliant thing! It’s great! ☺☺
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Thank you so much!! This means a lot,especially given that I’m trying something new.. Reading such a lovely comment is very encouraging!! 🙂
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Beautiful!
Your poems are simple and thoughtful. 🙂
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I always like to keep it simple! Haha..On a more serious note, I have always wanted to write in a simple lucid manner yet be able to invoke thoughts and emotions in the reader! It gave me great pleasure to read that you found my poetry to be as such.Thank you so much for the comment 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This is amazing ❤ I love it.
Thanks for dropping by my blog, for it brought me to yours!!
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Thank you, Apeksha! Keep writing and make us proud, little one! By 20 I want you to have achieved more than Erin did and believe me you are more than capable of doing just that and more!! No pressure,huh? 😉
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Sometimes a comment is so so so beautiful that you take time to respond to it, because you’re determined enough to make an equally pleasing reply! Haha 😀 This is what just happened with me!!
Thank you so very much for what all you’ve said above, it means more than I really can express. And surely, more than I deserve. Probably one of the best stuff anybody has said to me 🙂
Thanks for making my day ❤ People like you have always been a source of motivation!
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Haha, you underestimate your own abilities Apeksha! I may not pride upon my own poetry but I sure can appreciate good poetry..Let’s just say the very first time you appeared in my reader and when I learned of your age,I knew then that you were destined for something big! Keep writing girl,there will always be people (including me) to be there for you and to motivate you,should you require it! 🙂
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