Remember those nights we stayed up staring at the starry sky
you counting stars,me just admiring your beauty under their light
Today,I guess they have all joined you in wanting to hide
not a single one wants to come out and lie,its going to be alright
Remember the beach, the sands where we drew hearts joining our names
Watched the sunset holding hands and jumping over waves
Today, all that remains is the sea bleeding as the sun sinks in
no birds chirping by,not a single trace of wind.
Remember the poems I wrote to you,
read them aloud as you showered kisses at every romantic lay.
Those poems are the only places you’ll ever stay
along with my heart of course as I shelter this pain called love forever this way.
Ever noticed,Mother Nature takes care of her creations well,
the stars vanish only to shine brighter the following night,
the tree withers down only to bloom again,
Wonder if She will show mercy to do the same to my broken heart after all this pain.
– Aks
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/hopeful/
thegirlonthego08 said:
This actually sounds like an amazing song!!! So beautiful! ❤
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Aks Thariani said:
Wow! Honestly,Never thought of it that way.. Will try singing it now.. thankfully no one is in ear shot… Don’t want anyone to get startled by my ‘melodious’ voice, do I? 😉
Oh and thank you so much for the lovely comment yet again!! 🙂
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thegirlonthego08 said:
You deserve all the appreciation! ☺☺
And yeah, you can try singing it, it might actually come out really good, you never know! 😉 😁
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Aks Thariani said:
Haha, you know,you have the freedom to try singing it yourself.. If you do succeed I’ll be the first to promote it everywhere 😉
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thegirlonthego08 said:
Hahaha! Sure, why not.. 😉
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Aks Thariani said:
Haha.. Take your time , I’ll be waiting 😉
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Fallen Saint said:
Beautiful -Fallen
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!!
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Claire Puremont Farley said:
I really love this poem and keep coming back to certain lines. It’s a heart breaker and mender.
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Aks Thariani said:
Aww! Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.It truly made my day!!
I love how you put it at the end. Thanks again. Have a wonderful weekend! Stay blessed! 🙂
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Jeni G.J said:
Such a beautiful poem.Amazing thought that the stars were hiding.☺
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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LakshmiPrakash said:
Wow, man!
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Aks Thariani said:
Thanks! 🙂
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krunali said:
This one is amazing 😍
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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idontknowcookbook said:
Stunning :0
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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anne leueen said:
Lovely words. so well strung together. And it is hopeful.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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S. Thomas Summers said:
Happy New Year, Doc.
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Aks Thariani said:
Haha,Thank you! A very happy new year to you too,friend!
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ranu802 said:
Thank you for your visit. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Always a pleasure,Ranu 🙂
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ranu802 said:
Thank you for following my blog. I appreciate it. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
You’re most welcome,Ranu!
Meant to hit the follow button a lot earlier,strange how that didn’t quite transpire,anyways better late than never 🙂
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A Walk into the Woods said:
So much of Ethos that it made me wistful
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Aks Thariani said:
Aww! Thank you!!
I’m sure a walk into the woods would make you feel a lot better,I know it did work for me when I took a scroll down them over at your blog 😉 🙂
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sakurastearz said:
My favorite one so far. ❤️
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much for your extensive visit and words of appreciation! I’m so glad you liked it. Stay blessed, friend 🙂
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ndutarimi said:
This I love.. Forgive me if I ever paste it somewhere else
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