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*This Poem won the Limerick Challenge Week 49 : Satire
With the arrival of the much anticipated letter,leaving it unopened,he rushed to buy the finest attire
Well past the marriage age,he had often endured much satire
Dressed in the best suit and tie
he caught the next plane to Mumbai
Never before had a man walked in with such enthusiasm to a funeral pyre.
– Aks
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Wow! It took me 3 reads to understand it 😂
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Thanks for reading it thrice!! Haha..
I’d usually explain each part as a para per se..but for the rules constraint!
It was fun though,never thought I could compress so much(usually bore you with pages,don’t I? 😛 hopefully the compression doesn’t turn out to be at the expense of the reader’s pleasure!!
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No no it was very good actually! I enjoyed reading it ☺☺
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I’m so glad to hear you did!! Thank you,Aishwarya 🙂
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This was goooood!!
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Thank you sooo much, Shereen!! 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you so much!! Really appreciate it 🙂
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Eww! Not a happy ending! Good one!
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Thank you! Unfortunately,not all things in life end on a happy note! 😉
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I agree.. 🙂
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Very cleverly written. 🙂
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Thank you so much!! Really appreciate it 🙂
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Well crafted
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Thank you! Appreciate you stopping by to comment.
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It’s a pleasure
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This was satire at its best in the limerick form! Loved it! Very clever!
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Thank you so very much!! I can’t appreciate this enough,honestly knew little about limerick poems until I came across the challenge and the appreciation given for the first attempt at it really moved me!! Thank you once again! 🙂
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You’re welcome! I am glad that this challenge has helped you learn more about limericks 😊 and that you are enjoying it!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Haha, good one! 😉
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Thank you!! 🙂
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You hate happy endings, don’t you. Ha ha. A lovely read.
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Haha Yuhu, never thought about my posts that way until now and you know, this intrigued me and I had to do a quick read of the posts on my blog to confirm if it’s indeed that way and had to go way back to ‘Passionate Eyes’ to get a post which ends on a happy note! Very interesting observation there. Thanks for bringing that up, poetry has always been a reflection of the soul’s musings for me and this is truly an interesting observation that you have made.
Also, thanks for the appreciation 🙂
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It’s always a pleasure reading your posts. Great job..
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Thanks again 🙂
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Hey! That was great one!
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