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She needed him,to reproduce
yet never stopped the whining abuse.
Touched softly on his arms and feet bare
A deep kiss on the cheeks marked the end of the affair
Satisfied,the sexy mosquito left for a new prey to seduce.
– Aks
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/exquisite/
The Greatest yet the most painful Act of Seduction in this world
emotionsoflife2016 said:
Powerful piece, with so much emotions
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Fallen Saint said:
Nice! I enjoy the analogy. -Fallen
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you!! I’m glad you did 🙂
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thegirlonthego08 said:
What a climax! 😀 Just loved this!! 😍☺
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! I’m happy you enjoyed the ending! 🙂
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Grandtrines said:
Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much! Means a lot! 🙂
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Grandtrines said:
You are welcome!
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vidur sahdev said:
super !
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Aks Thariani said:
Thanks,Vidur! Really appreciate it.
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Ana said:
Brilliant piece!
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you very much!! 🙂
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apoorvachouhan said:
The climax is just unexpected….!!:-)
Amazing piece…
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Aks Thariani said:
Thanks,Apoorva! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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LakshmiPrakash said:
My! The end of the affair – how painful it should’ve been for him!
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Aks Thariani said:
Haha.. surely would have left a mark on him 😉
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LakshmiPrakash said:
Haha! The poor fellow!
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Prakhar Bansal said:
Nice😁👌
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Ananya Sharma. said:
Kudos to that climax, Aks. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Haha,thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed that! 🙂
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Alfaazon ki udaan said:
Too gud
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!!
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frankhubeny said:
Nice ending when one finds it is a mosquito.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you sir. Your words of appreciation mean a lot to me!
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Indira said:
Nice take.Interesting. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much Ma’am! It means a lot 🙂
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pranabaxom said:
😊😊😊 Loved the analogy, the twists and turns and the seductions.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked it. Nice rhyme there 😉
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Prakash Hegade said:
He he.. Nice one.. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you, sir!! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂
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ranu802 said:
It’s truly a wonderful limerick. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much Ranu!! 🙂
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paulchronicles said:
Great post Aks Thariani !! Your poems are absolutely inspiring, Keep blogging 🙂
I’m a med student too. I know it is a bit unrelated but this is my ophthalmology series feel free to comment or share with your colleagues. Follow to stay updated !
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Aks Thariani said:
Hey! Thank you so much for those words of appreciation! I’m so glad you find them that way 🙂
Yay! A high five for a fellow med student, love the fact that this blog helps me connect with so many, at various stages of this wonderful profession from all over the globe!
I’ll surely visit it soon and I’m sure it would be great!
Keep up the wonderful work, friend! 🙂
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paulchronicles said:
Thank you !! Yes it’s awesome I wish we had a group of just medical students somewhere here. I’m quite new so I don’t know if it’s possible at all 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Oh that would be a wonderful idea!!
By the way, you have an absolutely amazing blog and the amount of effort you put into it is remarkable! Please carry on with your wonderful work! I’ll be most eager to read the new ones as they come. Take care, Paul! 🙂 🙂
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paulchronicles said:
Thank you so much !!! Really means a lot to me 🙂 Sadly I am unavailable for the next 2 weeks. But I left a poll for my dear followers. Not a Goodbye but a See you soon. – http://wp.me/p8fEnQ-al
Poll: Which medical specialty is your favorite ?
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Aks Thariani said:
Sure, I did answer that poll question on the blog. Good luck with your exams! 🙂
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yuhublogger said:
The ending is absolutely unpredictable, as usual. That’s the best part of your works. Can’t wait to hear more. Brilliant.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much, Yuhu!! That’s so kind of you,your words of appreciation is what motivates me to write even more 🙂 🙂
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yuhublogger said:
That’s great! Cheers…
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uapsnu said:
The truth about Quentin McQuickers
Is he keeps a kazoo in his knickers.
Which explains how we heard
Him play ‘Grease is the Word’’
While sipping his tea at the vicar’s.
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