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She needed him,to reproduce
yet never stopped the whining abuse.
Touched softly on his arms and feet bare
A deep kiss on the cheeks marked the end of the affair
Satisfied,the sexy mosquito left for a new prey to seduce.
– Aks
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/exquisite/
The Greatest yet the most painful Act of Seduction in this world
The Poetic Syndrome 
Powerful piece, with so much emotions
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Nice! I enjoy the analogy. -Fallen
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Thank you!! I’m glad you did 🙂
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What a climax! 😀 Just loved this!! 😍☺
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Thank you so much!! I’m happy you enjoyed the ending! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you so much! Means a lot! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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super !
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Thanks,Vidur! Really appreciate it.
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Brilliant piece!
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Thank you very much!! 🙂
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The climax is just unexpected….!!:-)
Amazing piece…
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Thanks,Apoorva! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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My! The end of the affair – how painful it should’ve been for him!
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Haha.. surely would have left a mark on him 😉
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Haha! The poor fellow!
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Nice😁👌
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Kudos to that climax, Aks. 🙂
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Haha,thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed that! 🙂
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Too gud
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Thank you so much!!
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Nice ending when one finds it is a mosquito.
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Thank you sir. Your words of appreciation mean a lot to me!
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Nice take.Interesting. 🙂
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Thank you so much Ma’am! It means a lot 🙂
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😊😊😊 Loved the analogy, the twists and turns and the seductions.
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Thank you so much!! I’m glad you liked it. Nice rhyme there 😉
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He he.. Nice one.. 🙂
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Thank you, sir!! I’m so glad you liked it 🙂
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It’s truly a wonderful limerick. 🙂
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Thank you so much Ranu!! 🙂
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Great post Aks Thariani !! Your poems are absolutely inspiring, Keep blogging 🙂
I’m a med student too. I know it is a bit unrelated but this is my ophthalmology series feel free to comment or share with your colleagues. Follow to stay updated !
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Hey! Thank you so much for those words of appreciation! I’m so glad you find them that way 🙂
Yay! A high five for a fellow med student, love the fact that this blog helps me connect with so many, at various stages of this wonderful profession from all over the globe!
I’ll surely visit it soon and I’m sure it would be great!
Keep up the wonderful work, friend! 🙂
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Thank you !! Yes it’s awesome I wish we had a group of just medical students somewhere here. I’m quite new so I don’t know if it’s possible at all 🙂
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Oh that would be a wonderful idea!!
By the way, you have an absolutely amazing blog and the amount of effort you put into it is remarkable! Please carry on with your wonderful work! I’ll be most eager to read the new ones as they come. Take care, Paul! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much !!! Really means a lot to me 🙂 Sadly I am unavailable for the next 2 weeks. But I left a poll for my dear followers. Not a Goodbye but a See you soon. – http://wp.me/p8fEnQ-al
Poll: Which medical specialty is your favorite ?
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Sure, I did answer that poll question on the blog. Good luck with your exams! 🙂
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The ending is absolutely unpredictable, as usual. That’s the best part of your works. Can’t wait to hear more. Brilliant.
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Thank you so much, Yuhu!! That’s so kind of you,your words of appreciation is what motivates me to write even more 🙂 🙂
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That’s great! Cheers…
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The truth about Quentin McQuickers
Is he keeps a kazoo in his knickers.
Which explains how we heard
Him play ‘Grease is the Word’’
While sipping his tea at the vicar’s.
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