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Life’s isn’t simple,it’s the biggest lie
Leaving it to God,hoping it will be alright
No matter how windy it gets or how stormy the sky,
A candle has to burn before you put a hand around to protect it’s light.
Life isn’t always cheerful and glittering
Sometimes,it’s colored with shades less bright
Loneliness embittering
But then,dark clouds are more soothing than intense sunlight.
Life doesn’t always make sense
It’s funny,fictious,often hard to buy
Light years away,millions of atoms burning intense
But all you see is a star twinkling merrily in the night sky.
Life loves to hit you hard often like a stone thrown into a serene lake
While you watch your ‘soul mates’ just ripple by
So feel the pain,feel alive,enjoy the challenges it can bake
and kiss them a delightful good bye.
Life is your empty piece of paper,fill it,decide what gets embedded
But makeΒ sure it continues to meanΒ something even when it gets shredded.
– Aks
Daily prompt – Mope
yes…it is…
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I’m glad you share similar views! Thank you π
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Loved it, especially the ‘candle has to burn…’, ‘…a star twinkling merrily in the night sky’, and the last two lines! π
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Thank you so much Lakshmi!! It makes me really happy to read that you loved it π
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It’s a pleasure to read your poems, Aks! π
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Lakshmi, that means a lot to me! Thank you π
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Keep going, buddy! Cheers! π
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Great words β¨ππ«
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Thank you so much,Ma’am! It means a lot π
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It’s such a joy reading your poems ! Keep going .
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I’m smiling from ear to ear and beyond now :))
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LOVELY…
so Intensely put, all the facts that everyone go through.. π
Happy new year..
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Thank you so much Ma’am!! Happy new year to you too π
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Happy New Year Friend! π
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Thank you so much!! A very happy new year to you too! May you have a wonderful year ahead π
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Happy new year!
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Thank you so much!!
A very happy new year to you too! May you have a wonderful 2017 π
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Happy new year
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Thank you so much!!
New Year wishes to you too! Have a blessed year π
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That was such a beautiful take for Mope! Loved the lines. π
New year greetings… π
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Thank you so much Sir! Means a lot!!
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You write so beautifully and yet do not lose touch with reality, meaning your work doesn’t get vague in their quest to become poetic. This one has motivated me so muchβΊ
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Aww!! Thank you so much!!! I’m just speechless here, finding it difficult to express gratitude in words to match such a lovely comment!! π
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Lovely.. π
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Thank you! π
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I love it mainly because its the truth yet it keeps your every engaged, would you mind checking out my account I have just started and not people seem to read my blogs. love your poems though!
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Thank you!!
Sure,it’ll be a pleasure π
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Again, a wonderful one. β€
Life has different shades and we come across them in the different phases of our lives. What seems trivial now might turn out to be the most important thing to us in future and vice-versa. We never know what life has to offer us, but anyway we deal with it, merrily or disdainfully, but we do deal.
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Thank you so much!!
Very true, sometimes we do not get what we desperately need and can’t imagine living without, life begs to differ and we end up thanking life for doing so as time passes by. Of course not everything that we get is the best for us, not everything that happens is for the good, life does have its own say, sometimes behaves a little harsh and sometimes doesn’t make any sense but then it also does give plenty of unexpected surprises and joy to make amends.
Wonderful thoughts,Aditi,thank you so much for sharing them here π
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Thank you for sharing it! Much appreciated π
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That’s beautiful ππ»
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Thank you,Dhwani! π π
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Oh Wow!!! I loved your way of describing the stars, we see. And the last two lines… Brilliant.
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Thank you so much,Yuhu! I’m so glad you liked it. Your words mean a lot to me π
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My pleasure. π
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Nice written
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Thank you so much!!
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Omg this is so beautifully written – you’re so talented x
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Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot to me!! π
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Reblogged this on Love: After Hours and commented:
I came across this piece of writing the other day and I felt as though I had to share it.
We’ve all experienced the shitty things that life can throw at us, especially at the most inopportune times. One of my greatest fears is having life beat me down. It can be relentless and more times than not, I want to quit. I want out. I don’t want to “adult” anymore. And I’m sure I’m not the only one who’s been there.
But remind yourself, as this poem did for me – that there is good in life. And that my friends, is where your focus should be!
Enjoy!
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I love this post has 100 percent honestly in it when we are small we say I can’t wait to grow up but when we are actually grown ups we wish to become small again life has too many ups and downs and sometimes more downs than we expect sometimes we tend to think what’s the point of living if we are going through so much but everything happens for a reason and there must be some good in it and if our down happen to come from a human we shall never fear because karma will take care of it for what as they say what comes around goes around we should live life be happy and be ready for everything we have to face we might be thinking we are going through a lot but there are others with much worse case than us thank you for this and do check out my blog posts I’m new to the blogging world would love to know what is your feedback on them x
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This is sooo good man! Loved the last line.
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Thank you so much!! I’m so glad you liked it that much π
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i love this poem, it mirrors how i often think about life so perfectly. you have quite a poetic touch π
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Thank you so much!! Those words of encouragement mean a lot π
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Oh my god, I’m just loving all of these!!Youre amazing, honestly. Like writing from your heart n all, mate you really do that, it shows:)
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Thank you so much!! You have an amazing blog yourself, enjoyed reading your posts especially the first poem! Those lines were indeed brilliant! I hope you continue making such lovely posts there and enjoy the utmost while you are making them π
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Thankyou soo much! This really means so much specially coming from you since you yourself are such an amazing poet. Thanks a lot! Again, I loved loved your work:)
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Thank you so much. You are too kind! π
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