I dreamed my friend and I playing on the streets,in peace amidst the honking cars
I dreamed my favorite teacher at school,entering,a broad smile on her face on being greeted again by an entire class
I dreamed shaking hands with the police uncle who stood at the corner,without fear playing on our minds,thinking of me just as a child in awe and honor
I dreamed the local hospital,no longer in ruins,nurses dressed in the purest whites,beds mostly empty with clean sheets
I dreamed Β my father,he’s back and safe,my elder brother found and none will ever call me again waif
I dreamed children with wounds meaning no more than involvement in rough play, bandages uncommon becoming a sight appalling unlike today
I dreamed food less salty,Mother feeding me with her hands while identifying constellations in the balcony
I dreamed gazing at the stars,skies smokeless and clear but I am no longer desperate for them to shoot down
I dreamed shouting the words freedom and meaning it in our small town.
I dreamed but Mother didn’t want me to dream any more,
she told dreaming is a sin when this World is the judge
but sweet Mother,it’s the only way I can get my mind off this hunger much.
– Aks
NoteΒ : The narrator is a child living in these horrid times in the war-stricken countries.
It’s been extremely painful to read all that has transpired in the last few days.We can only pray this end soon.
On a different note, the last few months have been quite hectic for me and thus I have failed to give time to WordPress.Being in my final year of my undergraduate course I hardly am optimistic of that changing any time soon but I am extremely eager to update myself with the recent posts on my favorite blogs and will surely do it soon,one blog at a time.Also,I am lagging by quite a lot in replying to the comments on this blog and to respond to the new follows.Thank you so very much for all that appreciation,it truly means a lot and I promise to get back to each and every one of you very soon.
The feels are so strong with this one.
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Well,thank you Shereen! I owe a lot to you though.I may not have visited your WordPress blog in quite a while but I have been following your Insta pretty regularly and have been truly blown away by your work there.I haven’t made an insta account though to like or comment on them but have loved reading them endlessly! Thank you so much for writing such beautiful poetry. In fact the golden leaf one was what inspired me to get back and write something myself,no matter how rough it turned out to be,so thank you so much!! Please keep writing π
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Woah woah woahh.. now this got me by huge surprise!! I did not know I could be a source of such inspiration. Damn, this is so overwhelming. Hehe =”)
Thank you so so much for the appreciation.. so huge on me, sheesh.
I hope you love what you read, now and further.
Besides, I am looking forward to more of your posts too! =)
God bless.
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Such an emotional and a moving piece.
It’s been a while now, hasn’t it? I’ve missed your posts. Do your very best in your education! Can’t wait to read more of your posts.
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Thank you so much Yuhu,I can’t express how much this means to me! It’s been quite a while and I can’t wait to go over to yours to read all those posts that I have missed over the last few months.I’m sure you have come a long way since the last time I made a visit π Take care,friend!Stay blessed π
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Thanks a lot! Good to have you back.
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Wow. Beautifully written and heartfelt. It is sad that these children have to live through the horrors of war at an age when they should be playing and learning fearlessly. There are no winners in any war, only losses. Makes me wonder where we are heading! But as long as there are people doing whatever little they can to help, protect and reach out to the innocent victims I believe we can still hold hopes for humanity. May god bless them.
This post was the best thing I read today.
All the best for your exams. Do well. Take care.
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Thank you soo much Nitya Ma’am!! Your lovely comment made the whole thing so worth it!
Whole heartedly agree with you on that,we cannot afford to lose hope in humanity! Indeed,may God bless and take care of those who are suffering down there.
Thank you for your wishes! π
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Very touching!
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Good to see you back. Ofcourse, got to prioritize and finish your course well. We’ll still be hereπ
Nice dream and written with such a good heart.
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Most people dream about their worldly success. You dream about the welfare of the society. People get wounded not in a fight, but while playing, hospitals not crowded. Let your dream come true.
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This one just hits the heart hard. Beautifully written. Together we dream along with the child and hope for the best.
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Thank you Jeni! I have missed your wonderful blog and those words of appreciation that made me smile from ear to ear every single time. I am fortunate to have a friend like you on this platform who kept me going all this while π
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Beautiful…πππ
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Thank you so much! π
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It’s been so long!!
Well an amazing postπ
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Hi Apeksha! It has indeed been a long long time haha… Amongst all the wonderful things that I have been missing out on due to my inactivity on this platform over the last yr, missing out on reading your amazing work is right up there. Can’t wait to get there and see what you’ve been up to all this while!
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Hey, this means a lot!! I promise I’ll let you know when i get back to blogging. Actually I’m in 10th, so since boards are round the corner, I’ve been away.
Happy blogging, see you in april! β€
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Oh.All the very best then! Ace the boards π
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You’re kind :’)
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Your poem was a perfect example of beautiful writing and advocacy for those suffering from the war. Much appreciated.
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Thank you so much! You’re very kind π
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I am completely in love with this – it started so gently and twisted to quickly, you are an amazing writer!!
Abby – http://www.seafoaming.com
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Thank you for your kind words friend. They mean a lot π
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Loved the narrative. Just started writing, maybe you can give me some tips on how to improve!
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This is so moving. The transition from the opening paragraph towards the finale is very nicely handled!
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