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Christmas, gift, goals, life, Limerick Poetry Challenge, Limericks, motivation, poem, poems, Poetry, writing
Staring at the empty spaces under the Christmas tree,he let out a sigh,
“What’s good in growing old if Santa no longer comes by!”,
Insightful thinking was soon disrupted,
The phone rang and the parents of his ‘once critical’ patient,with wishes,erupted
A sweet little voice spoke,barely holding back his cry,”Merry Christmas,my Santa with a tie!”
– Aks
The author dreams to have a similar impact on the lives of people and that will be his goal for the coming year and for the ones after – for the Limerick Week Challenge week 50 – Goals
Limerick#3,a bountiful gift
twinklingwords said:
How beautiful 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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Ananya Sharma. said:
This was actually very amusing and amazing! 😀
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much Ananya!! I’m glad you found it so 🙂
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The Icognito Writer said:
Truly beautiful and inspiring
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!!
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The Icognito Writer said:
no problem
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emotionsoflife2016 said:
Beautiful
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you!
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emotionsoflife2016 said:
My pleasure
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Nikita said:
This was a total AAAAWWWWWWW thing ❤
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much Nikita!!! Means a lot! 🙂
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theburghalhidage said:
Nice Aks 🙂
I wish poetry were more my medium. Like the opening imagery, the less thought of aspect of the holiday…..empty space beneath the tree. Clever
Happy Christmas and a very Merry New Year, my friend!
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! Comments like these motivate me to continue penning down stuff and I can’t thank you enough for it! I enjoy your writing too! Still waiting for your novel to achieve completion, may 2017 see the completion of your wonderful work and I’m sure you’ll receive all the appreciation you truly deserve once its published! Merry Christmas to you too, friend! Stay blessed!
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MindandLifeMatters said:
That is an honorable goal, indeed! Beautifully presented story in the form of a limerick!
p.s: apologies for the delayed comment, I was out of town and couldn’t check my blog!
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much Ma’am! It’s perfectly fine,hope you a lovely trip! 🙂
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anne leueen said:
Very moving and what a wonderful goal for the year ahead.
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Aks Thariani said:
Thank you so much!! 🙂
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ranu802 said:
Thank you so much for your visit. 🙂
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Aks Thariani said:
Thanks for having me there,always a pleasure to visit Sabethville 🙂
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