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Sun-flower Not Meant To Be

29 Sunday Jul 2018

Posted by Aks Thariani in Poetry, Uncategorized

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life, love, Nature, poem, Poetry

Amongst the beautiful meadows of yellow delight
Stood eminently
A month old cute one
Adoring the golden light.

She was madly in love
Ever since she had made it through
Seen the world with her eyes
In the brilliance of her beau

She knew of the competition
Her peers were many
But she knew she loved him
More than any.

Each day she’d try to hold on
To the little pearls of dew
Hoping her lover would come out
And see her sparkle,her little way to woo.

Each day she’d hope
He wouldn’t leave her side
After shining so brightly
He wouldn’t go back to hide

Perhaps her love wasn’t enough
Perhaps she wasn’t expressing it right
She’d hardly get any sleep in wait
Neither would the thoughts leave her at night.

One day she flowered,bloomed with joy
Flaunted her precious gift with pride
‘This would surely make him stay!’ She thought
As he moved,she made sure it stayed on his side.

Alas,dusk and her heart was broken
She was left alone in incessant cry
That night was rough and icy winds blew
Taking with it her cherished gift,she didn’t have the strength nor will to ply.

She loved him unconditionally
Perhaps that’s why she was in pain
Dawn came no sooner that day
And yes,She was in love again.

– Aks

It’s been so long that it would be really inappropriate to give any excuse haha. (I’m Sorry!truly am 😦 )

I really hope you are doing well and had an amazing weekend.

A small thank you note to all my new followers,I’m so sorry,couldn’t get back to you’ll soon enough. Pretty confident this long a break ain’t happening again. Cheers guys!

Photo credits : Google images.

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Wrinkled in Love

01 Sunday Jan 2017

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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humor, life, poem, poems, Poetry, writing

Dressed in his best suit and tie

He sat on the wheelchair,holding a bouquet of roses

A long cherished dream that saw half a century go by

Only the roses were white and she,was in black

And the priest spoke of a peaceful after life rather than the journey of two hearts onto a single track.

 

Their eyes met as each surveyed the body,their fingertips had once grown so familiar to

He still saw the submissive look in her eyes of that night in the train

She still saw the passionate look in his,of those kisses in the rain

He had lost most of his teeth but she still remembered their bite

Her hair wasn’t silky anymore but he still remembered his hands glide

Their bodies might have lost color but love hadn’t lost its touch

Like a leaf preserved between pages remaining forever such.

 

Two hours had passed and innumerable conversations had been made

Not a word had been spoken but the pain of their souls had been conveyed

Tears rolled down again as it was time for yet another good bye

People around,oblivious,admired his love for the deceased ally.

 

The following day saw him at the Church again

Thanking the Lord for the previous day’s gain

Lit a candle and as per the routine wish,he’d say

“Lord,Don’t get me wrong but soon,please take another mutual friend away”.

– Aks

Dear Reader,here is wishing you a very Happy New Year! May you have a wonderful 2017.

Daily prompt – Year

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Life

31 Saturday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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inspiration, life, motivation, poem, poems, Poetry, thoughts, writing

 

Life’s isn’t simple,it’s the biggest lie

Leaving it to God,hoping it will be alright

No matter how windy it gets or how stormy the sky,

A candle has to burn before you put a hand around to protect it’s light.

 

Life isn’t always cheerful and glittering

Sometimes,it’s colored with shades less bright

Loneliness embittering

But then,dark clouds are more soothing than intense sunlight.

 

Life doesn’t always make sense

It’s funny,fictious,often hard to buy

Light years away,millions of atoms burning intense

But all you see is a star twinkling merrily in the night sky.

 

Life loves to hit you hard often like a stone thrown into a serene lake

While you watch your ‘soul mates’ just ripple by

So feel the pain,feel alive,enjoy the challenges it can bake

and kiss them a delightful good bye.

 

Life is your empty piece of paper,fill it,decide what gets embedded

But make sure it continues to mean something even when it gets shredded.

 

– Aks

 

Daily prompt – Mope

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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It’s Christmas!

27 Tuesday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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Christmas, inspiration, life, motivation, poem, poems, Poetry, writing

It’s that time of the year again

The trees begin to chime

Stockings are in every rhyme

Turkeys ruin all those hours at gyms

Kids enjoy their door visits singing beautiful hymns.

Snow falling and hearts frozen

Sudden love for God now arisen

Celebrating the day when the Lord arrived as a child

Yet never giving freedom to their suppressed inner child

Let’s make merry this Christmas day

Retreat from all our inhibitions  and just shout hurray.

–  Aks

 

 

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Down on one knee

25 Sunday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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Christmas, funny, life, love, poem, poems, Poetry, writing

 

“Five years,should you come back then,I promise..”,she said.

Words he kept repeating everyday in bed

Striking off the next date in the calendar before the clock struck midnight

Days shortening,smile broadening

The wait was nearly over,he could finally see the light.

 

She wanted him to stand firmly on his knees before going down on one

He had done his best,now a doctor,second to none.

The day arrived,she got his call,unexpected

Voice stuttering,heart fluttering

Pondering about the promise that had to be respected.

 

Candle light dinner,nervous laughter and he finally went down on his knee

Held out his hand,his heart on a thumping spree

Looking down,hoping to feel the warmth with her cold touch

Body shivering,hands quivering

Praying intensely,promising the Almighty,in return,much.

 

His hand still cold and with no words spoken

A minute passed like an eternity and he was all broken

Looked up amidst tears blurring his eye

Her face turned,his loyalty spurned

Little could she do,troubled with an imminent sneeze that just wouldn’t come by.

–  Aks

Merry Christmas,dear Reader! May the spirit of Christmas bring the bests of health and happiness to your home! Stay blessed.

Also,I haven’t posted any message to thank you yet on this blog and that is something I have been wanting to do for a long time now.I guess there couldn’t have been any better day for it,so here it is – A Big THANK YOU to all my fellow bloggers and followers for being so supportive and encouraging at all times! It’s helped me immensely and I truly can’t appreciate it enough! Thank you!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The Ultimate Christmas Gift

17 Saturday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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Christmas, gift, goals, life, Limerick Poetry Challenge, Limericks, motivation, poem, poems, Poetry, writing

Staring at the empty spaces under the Christmas tree,he let out a sigh,

“What’s good in growing old if Santa no longer comes by!”,

Insightful thinking was soon disrupted,

The phone rang and the parents of his ‘once critical’ patient,with wishes,erupted

A sweet little voice spoke,barely holding back his cry,”Merry Christmas,my Santa with a tie!”

–  Aks

The author dreams to have a similar impact on the lives of people and that will be his goal for the coming year and for the ones after – for the Limerick Week Challenge week 50 – Goals

Limerick#3,a bountiful gift

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Limerick – Satire

07 Wednesday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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challenge, creative writing, flash fiction, humor, life, Limerick Poetry Challenge, Limericks, poem, poems, Poetry, satire

limerick-superstar

*This Poem won the Limerick Challenge Week 49 : Satire

 

With the arrival of the much anticipated letter,leaving it unopened,he rushed to buy the finest attire

Well past the marriage age,he had often endured much satire

Dressed in the best suit and tie

he caught the next plane to Mumbai

Never before had a man walked in with such enthusiasm to a funeral pyre.

– Aks

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An Eerie Night

06 Tuesday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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funny, hope, horror, inspiration, life, motivation, poem, poems, Poetry, scary

You look out of the window,

into the ghastly night

as Spooky winds blow

Hair erect,teeth clenching tight.

 

You look away into the comfort of your room,

it’s pretty warm and bright inside

But the lights go off soon and now you’re left in fright

you panic a little,ensuring the candle flame has also died.

 

That terrifying scene from the horror movie last night,

those stories of martyrs returning as ghosts your friends made during the hiking

yes,the ones you laughed off without a sigh

now,you give them a bit too much credit for your own liking

 

You hear a buzz all of a sudden

petrified,pale,you turn around to face death in it’s brand now form

your cold hands barely grasping the nearest object,turns out it’s a button

Nevertheless you turn around ready to strike

but you end up relieved as you see light

from a firefly burning for you far from its swarm.

 

It’s all calm now,you know you can make it through the night

the horror is over and you have to thank the firefly burning by your side

People go through worse you know,

nights dark and lonely

so shy not away from being the firefly they need

Burn a little,you might be their only.

 

– Aks

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Love is Not enough

05 Monday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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life, love, Nature, poem, poems, Poetry, thoughts

Remember those nights we stayed up staring at the starry sky

you counting stars,me just admiring your beauty under their light

Today,I guess they have all joined you in wanting to hide

not a single one wants to come out and lie,its going to be alright

 

Remember the beach, the sands where we drew hearts joining our names

Watched the sunset holding hands and jumping over waves

Today, all that remains is the sea bleeding as the sun sinks in

no birds chirping by,not a single trace of wind.

 

Remember the poems I wrote to you,

read them aloud as you showered kisses at every romantic lay.

Those poems are the only places you’ll ever stay

along with my heart of course as I shelter this pain called love forever this way.

 

 

 

 

Ever noticed,Mother Nature takes care of her creations well,

the stars vanish only to shine brighter the following night,

the tree withers down only to bloom again,

Wonder if She will show mercy to do the same to my broken heart after all this pain.

– Aks

https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/hopeful/

 

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A Glorious Evening

03 Saturday Dec 2016

Posted by Aks Thariani in Uncategorized

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daily-prompt, flower, god, inspiration, life, literature, love, Nature, poem, poems, Poetry, thoughts, writing

Abused and cursed Him as He took my withered rose with thorns away,

oblivious I was to the even alluring primrose left by my side with a note underlay.

Sighted it amidst my demands for an early night,

It read,the rose was but to help you make it to the evening light

It is evening now,and the evening is here to stay!

– Aks

 

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